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Stars Pale... |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Man enraptured self cleverness our ingenuity astounds our pride we easily fall to find Stars Pale besides Streelights Fade black in one EyesLie "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions: Interesting first post...the opening line is very intriguing...enjoyed. ThisDiamond |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
A good poem for a night like tonight , captured well with the right words |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
something to think about |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Imagination's memory held yesterday's stars as seen through the mists. ~*~ You DO inspire! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
EternitysHorizon, The truth creatively depicted! I enjoyed this tightly woven thought very much. Excellently expressed... Sadelite |
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