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lucky
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0 posted 2004-02-29 08:17 PM



somewhere upon my
misty sea before awakened dawn
I try to peek in gateways to things I’ve
dreamed beyond stumblin’ o’er the
obstacles who rise up with
out theme forming
echoes endless
in the halls of places

I have been in hues of muted blushing
I’ve wandered all the night where emerald fades
to ochery and morning beckons light but in my
flinch of wakening and stumbling through
my head I’ve come to find the

wishes and
dreams
I’ve left
in bed are
scattered o’er
the woodlands and
far beyond the crest and found
throughout the nexus on gateways lichened rest



Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


© Copyright 2004 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-02-29 08:22 PM


"somewhere upon my
misty sea before awakened dawn
I try to peek in gateways to things I’ve
dreamed beyond stumblin’ o’er the
obstacles who rise up with"

Dale...I do this too.

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2004-02-29 10:30 PM


thanks for sharing this poem ...sometimes they hit home ...great write

jw

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3 posted 2004-02-29 10:38 PM


Some say "Roads Impassable"
to which I reply
Who braved to carve the way
where none ventured afore
that a road exists at all
lichened over but once upon a time...

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

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4 posted 2004-03-01 04:11 AM


in awe of how you do this!
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-03-01 09:50 AM


Lucky~
OH WOW !!!!

Impressed ALWAYS by the lovely way you let your thoughts flow down the page~
Word-Art at it's finest~

Such a treat from such a talent~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-03-01 05:20 PM


Nice writing...James
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7 posted 2004-03-02 03:30 AM


your words have such deep artistry even without the inventive format....
you leave me in awe almost every time.

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