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j0n4th4n
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since 2003-03-11
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0 posted 2004-02-29 08:08 PM


The angel I found
in the chill deep of Winter
I have
pulled
with
me
into
Spring;
and together we continue,

but what I fear
is one day, I'll look
back to my memory for her
because it will be the only
place I find can her. I

feel afraid that my
living now is just memory;
when I am old, and she is gone,
how,
how will I find her?

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Martie
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1 posted 2004-02-29 08:13 PM


jOn

I have known a few angels...and what I have found is that you don't find them, they find you.  I enjoyed your poem and thought here.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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2 posted 2004-02-29 08:40 PM


Love her now...and you will find her then.
So enjoyed this write.
TD

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-03-01 04:44 AM


kinda sad, but beautiful
dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
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4 posted 2004-03-01 05:10 AM


They not only find you...but only stay on
their own terms...even when we want them to stay forever.   NICE POEM, THANKS

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