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lucky
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0 posted 2004-02-29 12:58 PM



listening to the cold
winds blow o’er the snows of
great dispense zephyrs cramped
in yearning like reminiscence
wrapped in dreams who
forever have been
the dusky
themes
& are
never
satisfied
characteristic
of an alien guide into

things of tasteless camaraderie
where into nights they saunter turning
dawns to awful dread my days are in the
waking to the trails my life has tread yet
into seas of quaking dreams I gait
with amble stride daylight
stands between us
but between
just you
and I

dreams
won't be denied



Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


© Copyright 2004 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-02-29 10:18 AM


Dale

"but between
just you
and I

dreams
won't be denied"

It's always so good to see you, dear friend, and your wonderful poetry.  



Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-02-29 01:06 PM


Lucky~

I'm the one who feels lucky today ... to read a word painting from you is a gifted treasure for sure~

My love to all the family~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-02-29 01:12 PM


Brilliant

Needed saying, but who has the courage to do it in their everyday lives

Yes

I will print this out for my wall, if you dont mind.

Dave

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-02-29 01:50 PM


this is incredible! What a fine presentation!
lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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5 posted 2004-02-29 05:40 PM


So nice to see you all... sweet words coming from great poets. Sure Dave,
so many of my friends twist my arm
for copies it goes without saying...
I wish they had computers and their
own printers, ha! Nice to see you
too Dixie your poetry is always an
interest (especially if I'm down and
I want to see someone who get into
the mire worse than I... Ha Ha!)

Always nice to see my two sisters
(your such a boost) always makes
my day brighter...

thank you all so much, dale

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
6 posted 2004-02-29 09:36 PM


I especially like your words:

"between
just you
and I
dreams
won't be denied"

Isn't that the truth!  Dream worlds have a life of their own, and it is impossible to stop them.

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
7 posted 2004-02-29 10:05 PM


Very well written! Grover.
lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
8 posted 2004-03-01 11:19 PM


Rosemary how nice to see you here
most the time your at that haiku place
over yonder. Love you babe

and Grover nice to see you again...

Thank you all again, dale

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


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