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Open Poetry #31

The long way home

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-01-27 10:42 AM

I'm taking a path,
rigid and painful.
The long way home.
Through bloody perils,
and emotional battles.

Somehow I get locked in chains of pain.
It's been a fun while.
The long path I take.
I'm going home,
in a moment or awhile.

The long way home,
to all avail.
The wonderous moments that await.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-01-27 11:37 AM

Kellie~

'I'm going home,
in a moment or awhile'

I like the sentiment in this piece~
You ARE home sweet poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-01-27 06:37 PM

Dear Kellie, this is very touching ..... as is your piece about mother and son which I read in Reflections, that one is incredibly well constructed and left me in tears of extreme melancholy.

Love and my compliments. Margherita

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-01-27 06:57 PM

Well said, Kellie! A simple map dotted with complex emotions. Keep up the excellent efforts! Grover.

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