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Conspiracy of Desperation
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Conspiracy of Desperation |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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help me run like melody and harmony, the singing of freedom flight or fight and to hate is liberating no prisoner here no love no love i lost my way during the escape swallow the key run away, flee faster than heartbreak dont let it catch me no love no love where is the way to alone, to afraid? cant get back from here follow safety's echo homeward found keep pushing forward force myself through no love no love. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Muted, running so far with no place to go, running the race of life from heartache, fighting the struggle of independence and the gravity of another. Be not afraid of life, of love, of beginnings and endings, we are all here to tease them and to test them, so I wish you luck my friend. Stop running and face life. Enjoyed the read her, thanks for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When heartache is determined to catch you, legs can't move fast enough and there's no place to hide. Excellent write, my friend! |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
no love, no love, though I loved this write...sorry for the cheesy comment, but it just came to me C? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
quite sad but still beautiful in a great way |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is a sadness here..a crying out...i here you... and so do others....talk and people listen..very fine poem Muted... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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