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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-02-26 11:42 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#200

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


seeing that tingling

nerves wouldn’t keep

peace

I patiently stay

still

nothing happens


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2004 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2004-02-26 11:43 AM


(chuckling) I do so love the open ended way you express these... allowing me to take them as I wish and to ponder intend as well as the possibilities..

well done sir.. well done indeed.


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2 posted 2004-02-26 11:47 AM


YES I have been awaiting this one Mark, and with certainty I knew it would be incredible,
I was right.     

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3 posted 2004-02-26 11:56 AM


good one!
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4 posted 2004-02-26 12:20 PM


Ooooh yesssss...incredible Mark!!
Congrats on your 200th twenty or less!!
Thank you also poet sir, for teaching  me a new way with words...
that less can and is indeed MORE!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~


~ Can I keep you? ~
            -Casper  
            

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2004-02-27 12:17 PM


Thank you, Ron.  I think that'll do it for this series.  Time to think up of something different...

Thank you for your support Gentle Spirit -- it's been a fun journey.

Many thanks, LeeJ.

Thank YOU Nancy -- you've been my #1 fan!  It's been a road of growth and enlightenment, and yes, there is remarkable wisdom to the "less is more" adage.  Time to gestate something new...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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6 posted 2004-02-28 04:53 PM




(does happy 200 dance) Yay! Oh Mark, you continue to bring small treasures of priceless value to these pages, dearest friend, you are a joy to read, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2004-02-28 06:14 PM


Thank you, Noah -- I always appreciate reading your comments and knowing you've read the TOL's.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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8 posted 2004-02-28 07:44 PM


Most appropriate...You do these TOL's so
well...thanx Mark.

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2004-02-28 08:03 PM


Thank you, Barry.  And now it's time to ponder a new series...  Thanks for reading and sharing these with me over time.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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10 posted 2004-02-29 02:11 PM


I love the short ones. What you leave out says as much as what you put in.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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11 posted 2004-02-29 02:28 PM


and here's to the next 100

I'll be right here

MARK V SHELDON
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12 posted 2004-02-29 07:04 PM


Pilgrimage:  Absolutely.  In fact, it may indeed be that which is left to the imagination which is more effective than that which is presented to the eyes...  kind of a "Hitchcock premise"...

Thank you muchly, Dixie...  I'm gonna have to think of a new series worth doing a hundred times!

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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13 posted 2004-03-02 02:07 AM


200!  Yeah!  And this one is great!  Unfortunately, I don't know where to point you about publishing unless someday I get rich enough to do that and then I'll let you know, okay, Mark?  
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14 posted 2004-03-02 06:48 AM



Aren't goals
wonderful things?
Well done, Sir...
I ditto the Cap'n.

MARK V SHELDON
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15 posted 2004-03-02 09:57 AM


Jo:  Deal.  Thanks for your support and encouragement -- I have appreciated it.

Karilea:  Indeed they are.  Must make more...  Thank you for your thoughts.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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16 posted 2004-03-02 01:46 PM


hate to see the series end Mark... but do understand the reasons for ending one...


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