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Fantasy to Reality
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Fantasy to Reality |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Laid alone at night thoughts of you Swarming my dreams inside As you’d fall from heaven to my side Once alone feels like you’re with me tonight. Yet through misty boarders of my dreams A tear falls out into reality Releasing the truth from inside You’re not really here just a fantasy within. But still I’d travel through those dreams Real emotion drawing me back to you As I’d touch fantasy once more More tears would fall back to reality they’d soar. Yet a question I’d ask myself at times What if you were here with me? Would tears fall back into my dreams? As I’d wish fantasy would turn into reality If you were here with me My heart would finally be at peace Nomore need for this fantasy but reality. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very, very good! I enjoyed this well written poem. It flows very nice, good images and a great ending! Grover. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
nice poem , the opening lines are great JW |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Fine line between the two...fantasy is always a more pleasing place to be... ~I always enjoy your poetry! ~ARH  love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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