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Windmills
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Windmills In the windmill of my mind Grinds the millet of a kind Moments of my planted cast All the grain of fields of past. Bags of all my memories dust Sacks of all my living lust Tied and stored within the core Bags and sacks of evermore. My spirit turns the blades of thought Aged upon a stage I wrought Mixed with seasons in a blend To sail the river to its end And with the main reality I salted in banality Fixed a wish of fancy lie A little dish of cherry pie Forgive me friends this voice of muse The pies I like a choice of choose. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and all those grains solidified into one sweet man that's miles wide...with insight....good one |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Lovely metaphor this morning Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write as usual Sy! Very much enjoyed! Time for tea? Good.  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Delightful read this morning Sy. Hugs to you and your bride ... Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy My favorite pie is apple, and you are one of my favorite poets!  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, T-Man! Salting your life with a bit of banality has only added some spice to your beautifully seasoned life!  I really enjoyed this latest gift from your pen! Huggums, EA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A very fine piece...so much in there that displays a life lived...love the line about the "stage" and the ending is delicious! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no need to ask forgiveness  |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Hmmm is that what they mean when they say someone has "baggage"??? well written my friend, much enjoyed. Since this is an open forum I'll not say what kind of pie I prefer...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My spirit turns the blades of thought Aged upon a stage I wrought Mixed with seasons in a blend To sail the river to its end ~*~ Now you've got me thinking that Cpat should be coming along soon with some river stories... so turn the blades of thought...  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, thanks for the thoughts and for the cherry pie today.  Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you dear. scorpio Thank you my friend. Nancy Thank you sweet.  Marti Hugs back sweet thing. Martie Ericc Thank you Eric. Earth Angel Huggums back VAS THank you sweet passing That's true. sea_of_okc, And I'll not ask. Thank you Sunshine One never knows does one. Hugs Ethel Anytime love. |
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