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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-02-23 09:46 PM




Your love is irresistible
My limbs tremble at your touch
You are the air that I breathe
Of yourself you give so much

You are the colors in my rainbow
Upon the wings of love I fly
You have embraced my heart and soul
And now I reach towards the sky

You are the may-day of my heart
How I treasure times with you
Your love gives me inner strength
When I struggle to break through

Your love to me is sacred
And is priceless beyond measure
When I found your precious heart
I unearthed a hidden treasure

"Love....bittersweet,
irrepressible -
loosens the limbs
and I tremble"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Death
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Twilight
1 posted 2004-02-23 10:17 PM


A moving respone to the eternal ubuitous human quest.

All from the heart

garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-02-23 10:51 PM


You are the may-day of my heart
How I treasure times with you
Your love gives me inner strength
When I struggle to break through


Oh, yes Sue...I do know this with my Honey-Love!!
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-02-26 12:35 PM


Dear Sue:  Another beautiful poem from your pen!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-02-26 12:54 PM


Love the feelings of your poem and your art to protray it!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

5 posted 2004-02-26 05:47 AM


As usual Sue you write poems of love so good..rymed perfectly....and simply dripping with passion and emotion....

it is great to be back reading and replying to work like yours....

Thank you for the words..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Ericc
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6 posted 2004-02-26 10:22 AM


Beautifuly lyrical and sweetly flowing.

Eric

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7 posted 2004-02-28 04:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and your friendship is special to me and everyone here as you cast rainbows from every smile, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2004-02-28 06:39 PM


I enjoy reading your love poems. This is beautiful. As always.
Rick
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Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
9 posted 2004-02-28 06:44 PM


Dear Sue, this is just beautiful and very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing my friend.

Sincerely
Rick

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