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Death
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since 2001-05-26

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Twilight

0 posted 2004-02-23 03:52 PM

Twilight rain rapture
spinning star showers cleanse fogged hearts
sky song ritual summons forgiving while
ALL dreams summoned call bathe thee starlight

Remeberances white glowing midst calling night
all within FireHeartPassionsBreath seizing
mind ancient yesterdays dreams cleanse white
worth remembering gifts of Too-Long Nights

helpless kneeling stars brighter than July days
soft voice sings "only let your spirit fly
tonight cleans all and all disposing unrightheous
moments pouring stains from inner most sight"

falls about swirling light sparkling diamonds
voices fall growing choir stands melody drifts
symphony instruments spinning round the circle
every star begins to join LightSky Filled Filling..

Heaven thou hast washed me clean as never before
stumbling orientation clothes now snow-drift white
turning rejoin myself startled yet not, twould seem my sins required all night, for I greet the Sunrise

New cleansed reborn glowing internal embers alight
as worlds stand unshaken yet my eyes pierce beyond
Another twilight given light of One who knows only
the giving illuminata purging world's stain I stand

thousand words of thanks writing patheticly inadequate words for all that fills guides me keeps
hand on heart as I slip am brought back up ever
lasting mountain one fills lungs starved engulf

gasping life rarified air gift beyond measure fill to ever overflowing thy servant ForeversEternity
Humility thankfullness beyond those singing stars
I am thine in a life for a life thy will not mine

Not the most pleasant job around. But the PIP-Gods make me serve my penance.

[This message has been edited by Death (02-23-2004 10:12 PM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-02-23 04:03 PM

helpless kneeling stars brighter than July days
soft voice sings "only let your spirit fly
tonight cleans all and all disposing unrighteous
moments pouring stains from inner most thyself"

~*~

Ah, that inner voice...
what, yours does not yell at you?

Mine does!

Enjoyed this, Sir...

Martie

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2 posted 2004-02-23 04:37 PM

I felt a wonderful spin while reading this..dizzydraindownstarsupmewind!!

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-02-23 04:51 PM

Nice stream! Grover.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-02-23 08:03 PM

Beautiful sound to this...nice alliteration and imagery. In other words, I enjoyed reading this aloud! Thank you for sharing.
Sadelite

Death
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since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

5 posted 2004-02-23 08:30 PM

Thanks ALL, just trying to capture
in words one of those unforgettable times
as we all do trying with all will to attain
verbs adjectives the like moments which burned on heart and mind never seem to slip
away filed not but alive the mysterie Ieye

thanks again
Kj

[This message has been edited by Death (02-23-2004 11:12 PM).]

Death
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since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

6 posted 2004-02-23 09:03 PM

Actually Sunshine that "inner voice" tends to be most melody inclined with the counterpoint that drove me incessantly
for the early years of songs I dreamed

forever more than hoping
and now a tiny bit proves true
after twenty years of knowing tasting
sounds inches from my hand it works

but that as is said " Is another story"

Best of all to thee
Kj

Not the most pleasant job around. But the PIP-Gods make me serve my penance.

Sunshine

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7 posted 2004-02-23 10:59 PM

thousand words of thanks writing patheticly inadequate words for all that fills guides me keeps
hand on heart as I slip am brought back up ever
lasting mountain one fills lungs starved engulf

~*~

I think the stars dot your mountains tonight, Sir...

Came back to see how this was going, saw more was added...in all ways...

and as ever was, well done.

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-02-24 04:13 AM

*sigh*

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-02-24 07:47 AM

stunning work, and the wording is rather effective. This wraps one in such a heavenly feeling, like a warm breeze of peace
just blew by. Dixie is correct...*sigh*

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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