Lord of the Rings 1V - Return of Boromir

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2004-02-23 08:05 AM

A challenge was issued at another site to write a poem based on a given title. This is what I came up with.

It was such a little thing
that arrow in my chest
then came another and a third
to carry me to rest

But there can be no resting
with promises undone
I think I finally understand
I'll stay till Frodo's won

Betrayed by my emotions
then I betrayed him too
the passions, once my downfall
will work to see this through

No grave of water holds me
for I will rise and shine
and through death I'll braver be
the victory shall be mine

I'll hide here in the shadows
and follow Frodo's trail
to offer mist assistance
in this I shall not fail

I see him with my brother
he says he was my friend
these words I shall remember
until the very end

I hold him at the furnace
for this shall be my test
I will help destroy the ring
and go in peace to rest.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-02-23 09:20 AM

Kethry~
This is just a WONDERFULLY inspired piece~
What a soft and pleasurable read~
*Huglets*
Good day, sweet lady~

Drop me a note and let me know what's happening with the grandson~
LOVE YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2004-02-23 10:33 AM

I must confess that I hadn't read Tolkien's treasures until recently... and then, with each page, I wondered where my sanity had been all the years I avoided Middle Earth. *S*

I'm glad I didn't wait years to appreciate you, my friend... this is wonderful! *S* I think you've captured well the strong heart that was overpowered by a yearning for power.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-23 11:58 PM

Kethry -- I loved this!

......jo

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-02-24 12:15 PM

I have not seen the last movie yet....I enjoyed this write much, and look forward to seeing the movie....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2004-02-24 04:29 PM

Good job -- I could visualize his presence through your descriptions.

-MVS

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-02-24 04:33 PM

Excellent write Kethry...much enjoyed!
Hugs~

   ~ Can I keep you? ~
                  Casper

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-02-25 08:56 AM

I probably have to get off my hind end
and get to the movies someday to see
for myself, this magnificent story...
it sparks SO many imaginations.

Well done, Keth.

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