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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-02-21 02:38 PM


A Christmas I wrote some time and lost for someone

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Walking through the stalls
On a late night
Kissing my head on mistletoe
Telling myself the fruit
Was still fresh
Or so it felt
Or tight

As I guarded
Her belly
and an idea

Cold creeping in
People feeling good

Only problem with living

Was knowing
You were living
And knowing it would get tight



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1 posted 2004-02-21 02:57 PM




(big angel hugs) This sounded a bit bittersweet to me, dearest friend, I couldn't decide how "tight" was defined here, as in "tight" as love that's strong or "tight" as in suffocating somehow! (sigh) God Bless You, dearest friend, this is a heartfelt write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dave, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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