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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I'd gotten used to the unexpected rumbling air tickling my throat, Producing a low hobbling laughter, a smile to explode in Splatters of colors. I’d gotten used to the wise-cracking punning rivalies and wit on the loose; you were always a mystery who Inspired riddles for me to think. It’s funny how I feel myself out-of-the-body looking down And wondering who and what has died. Where has the laughter gone in hide? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Brilliant, C! |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Acrostic headed thy way Where indeed Hoping no such place exists Ye find all in everything together tossed Not I guess twould make a difference Only who really wants the refuse pile Toiling midst a million years of Why Not "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wonder that same thing about myself great piece, I could relate well |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Funny how it's usually everybody else, who keeps telling me, that I was never even funny, in the first place... lol Here's one for ya Sadie... Elvis goes up to heaven, and he raps his knuckles on the pearly gates... Knock knock? Who's there? Wurlitzer. Wurlitzer who? Wurlitzer one for the money, two for the show... See... I got nothing tonight... lol Oh by the way... "Thank yuh very much... "  |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"Where has the laughter gone in hide" I think we all wonder this sometime or another. Although..Its funny how, people think its funny, that things are no longer funny.. *MY HEAD HURTS* Ya got me thinking on this one, and the more I think..the more the funny thoughts just keep tickling my mind.. Thankyou for that!! I'm now off to basque in my new found delerious, hilarious thoughts!! Until next time..keep smiling  ^*Kim*^ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Waterfalls of laughter can't be too close in sequence, sometimes the river is calm, but the laughter is always ready to explode ... Watch for the surprise "attack". Brilliant write. Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And when did it sneak away? *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
You are truly talented Sadelite, your words are captivating and inspirational!! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Thanks to everyone for your kindness. I feel sure I will read your comments over and over. Be well. Cathy |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poetry - great insight and lots to ponder - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) As always you write with pure honesty and depth, sweet friend, it can feel familiar yet so distant all at once, God Bless You, nothing compares, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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