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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2004-02-20 08:40 PM



One Sweet Lady
~ By Sue ~

She tapped her feet
Each time she heard the music
She lit up the room

It was a pleasure
To take care of her each day
She will be missed

They laid her to rest
In a beautiful pink dress
She suffers no more

2-20-04


© Copyright 2004 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-02-20 08:42 PM


Poignant, sad... Grover.
David2
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since 2000-03-22
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2 posted 2004-02-20 08:43 PM


Oh Sue,
   This was very sad but sweet.
                David

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-02-20 09:19 PM


How sad Sue...how very sad.
well said...hope things are going well for you.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines
4 posted 2004-02-20 11:05 PM


sweet, short, but says a lot...amazing!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-02-20 11:11 PM


remembering and missing....and no more pain and suffering

that's what important!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-02-20 11:13 PM


You painted a beautiful woman full of life.
Thank you for the portrait.
                  Sadie

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