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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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burning candle weeps as romance wanes from deceit flickering flame dies ~ . . . Chris Barker ~~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chris, you do have a natural talent for these. A lot of expression is so very few words.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
burning candle weeps as romance wanes from deceit flickering flame dies ~ the candle has melted not a shred remains the romance never was |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea dear friend, thankyou so much.  inklady - I am honoured by your response. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
burning candle weeps as romance wanes from deceit flickering flame dies ~ Flames flicker and wind blown stream Darkness surrounds But the thrill of freedom The horns of hunting The leather of the chase Pass unheard, unseen In a galloping night of emotions To continue Until Dawn Dawn breaks Sun gently shows a dirty window And we live again Thank you for your words Inspirational Love Dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A complete poem with just a few words-- powerful words! Grover. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Chris... You are in the arms of everlasting...the tunes you weave are amazing. TD |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Truly inspriational as always. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
You waxed romantic very nicely here Chris Or should I say the cessation of such... The candle weeps The torch we keep To guide a love Once held so deep Loved This! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
burning candle weeps as romance wanes from deceit flickering flame dies ~ ~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~ So dark, this long night, made blacker by gathered clouds in a moonless sky- the candle flame flickers down. Will it last till dawn arrives? Feeling inspired by you rterse and poignant verse.....~P |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one Chris...you do these SO well. ~Hugs, Love and miss ya, Teed~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Chris, this is so very sadly heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs to all who feel this deceit and wish them joy to rejuvenate them and re-ignite the spark, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Poignantly written. I do enjoy your senryus and haikus very much Chris. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Every comment is just wonderful !! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Chris, this haiku was so concise and perfect in its expression. Enjoyed your talent! .......hugs, jo |
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