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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-02-20 02:09 AM


when clouds dim in light
  adding to the wall
  the days turn   tonight

  I'm lost in their fall

when tears roll thunder
  and lightnings the sky
  what I am under
  only makes me cry

            -  after the rain


when the grey divides
  breaking all the rules
  shifting through   the tides

  filling empty pools

when sun finds its way
  lifting spirits drowned
  rainbows come to stay
  that's where gold is found

            -  after the rain
  

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-02-20 05:31 AM


Great poetry, I loved your use of words and the arrangement~your style

~ARh
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

2 posted 2004-02-20 06:30 AM



Fantastic Write Here

Much Enjoyed!





inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2004-02-20 07:18 AM



when sun finds its way
  lifting spirits drowned
  rainbows come to stay
  that's where gold is found

            -  after the rain
  
yes and to quote one of your other brilliant
poems,
true love happens in the afterglow
yes, to rain and sun
when they make love, rainbows come

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-02-20 12:19 PM


oh Craig, that is just beautiful *sigh*
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