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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-01-26 04:23 PM



Picture by Jim Warren

* * *

As the sun begins to rise
And a brand new day is born
I watch the dolphins ride the waves
In the hours just past dawn

I stand tall just like a sentinel
And help guide the ships to shore
As the waves lap all around me
I hear the mighty ocean roar

The sea has become angry
As lightning cracks the sky
The seagulls look for shelter
As they struggle so hard to fly

I'm at the mercy of Mother Nature
So many storms I have endured
The ocean is a temptress
Many fisherman have been lured

The sea, it is so treacherous
Many boats have not returned
The mighty sea should be respected
There is so much still to be learned

In the quiet of the evening
Long after the storm has gone
I'll listen to the humpback whales
As they sing their mournful song

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2004-01-26 04:31 PM


Oh Sue! As always, this is just beautiful.
Bridget Shenachie
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2 posted 2004-01-26 08:57 PM


There is nothing as awesome as the ocean.  I really enjoyed reading this--and your wisdom washed over me in each stanza like a new wave.

Shenachie

steavenr
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3 posted 2004-01-26 09:11 PM


elegant imagery...thank goodness for the lighthouses of life
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4 posted 2004-01-26 10:41 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Sue, I believe the ocean is for all the siblings of us, all the other wonderful creaturs He created, and we should respect it and keep travelling across it to a minimum! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Tim
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5 posted 2004-01-26 10:43 PM


you have painted a wonderful picture, enjoyed.
McLean
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6 posted 2004-01-26 11:34 PM


Oh how I would love to go whale watching one day.

This poem instills tranquility when read...like the soothing, steady lap of the waves.  Well done.

Now what about that picture...DEVINE.  I spent much time looking at it, enjoying the artist's ability to convey pure relaxation and happy dreams.

McLean

Richy
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7 posted 2004-01-27 03:10 AM




Wow, you talk about a guiding light.

Sue, you really made that lighthouse come alive.
What a special gift it is, when it’s heart and soul
reaches out to those in need, picks them up in her
gentle palm, and brings them safely home...

Another one of my favorites of yours!
Richy



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8 posted 2004-01-27 03:31 AM


nice imagery...what a beautiful scene
Suetang
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9 posted 2004-01-27 04:05 PM


Thank you all for you fabulous comments.  That picture is one of my favourites and as I didn't have a picture of a lighthouse I thought that was second best.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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10 posted 2004-01-28 12:40 PM


Sue:  I loved this poem!  I find lighthouses so fascinating and have toured many of them along the Western coast of the U.S.  Some of them are supposed to be haunted and I can believe it after going through them. They are in a class by themselves, just like your poetry!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Suetang
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11 posted 2004-01-28 04:01 PM


Hello Betty Lou

You humble me so much with your heartfelt words.  You have been a constant source of encouragement and inspiration for which I am ever grateful.

Take care my friend

Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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