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vandana
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0 posted 2004-02-19 07:58 PM



Someone to talk with me,
Someone who can walk with me,
Someone who can make me happy
Someone who can love me,
Someone who can hold me.
I need someone
to share my thoughts.
I need someone
who can understand me,
And what I can do in life?
Someone who can love me,
Someone can see through me
What Iam really about?
Someone who can talk
someone who can share with
my dreams.
Someone who needs a friend
to hold the key,
so that the heart can open
And be free what I try to say?



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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2004-02-19 08:43 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Vandana, this is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, I wish this special someone to be in your heart always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-02-23 07:23 PM


Vandana,
   I enjoyed this very much.  I believe we all look for this throughout our lives.  You stated it well.     ~Sadie

I need someone
who can understand me,
And what I can do in life?
Someone who can love me,
Someone can see through me

suthern
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3 posted 2004-02-24 11:00 AM


Someone who needs a friend
to hold the key,
so that the heart can open

Oh, yes. *S* I like this very much! *S*

Ericc
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4 posted 2004-02-24 11:29 AM


A beautiful longing to your words.

Eric

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5 posted 2004-02-26 12:16 PM


Its hard to put what you have put into words , an A+ for honesty
passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-02-26 05:08 AM


good writing here

enjoyed this

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2004-02-26 05:33 AM


Very honest and loving poem from your heart..trust me there are people out there willing to listen....can you seek them and find them?.....when you do they will be ready...

thank you for the words.....

goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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