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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
picking up pieces trying to make a life from shards of what once was |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Illusion I know this feel. I have picked myself up many times, no matter how many times I've been brought to my knees. Very well done. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Right to the point....I feel the whoeness of your pieces....P |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes the shards are devoid of what made it break in the first place and that, makes it better.  "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wow right to the point, I know how this feels....peace ~~**~~ |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
empower yourself...i believe you can do it. Nice write too! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's all you can do |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! Grover. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
to consolidate into a new icicle then to fall again |
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