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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Less sixty two degrees when I looked and I felt the chill it was much colder than I had become safely accustomed to the earth again had moved away from the sun and just when I needed more I found less |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
62 sounds warm... but one does not always measure chill in degrees..or cold only in winter... nicely done Helen.. |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
I know too much this feeling of less. I hope it is always less of temperature for you, not less of love. Kaz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - sometimes less is more? BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Isn't it always that way? Enjoyed. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Now, now . . . you just didn't look in the right direction. I was right over ... there! jimmy |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That's the unfortunate thing about the gravitational force of bodies... Be them, heavenly Or human... They come, and they go It’s light, and then dark It’s warm, and then cold Thanks Helen I always love reading your work  |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Needing more and finding less is all too often the case. Nice poem! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Brava! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Huh? Sixty two degrees is near perfect, isn't it? Well, ok, I'm a little cold blooded. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Helen, I hope all is alright, sweet friend, it may be warmer than you think if you measure the thermostat by a different system, od Bless You, keep the faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
Beautiful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
happens that way, doesn't it? |
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