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anvil sounds
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anvil sounds |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
in filigrees of solitude a smithy anvil sounds the leaden waves of amplitude exceeding nature’s bounds like tsunami folds in eventide crashing o’er pallid coasts washing thoughts to override safety’s sullen boasts stillness shattered, like kaleidoscopic glass as Thor-like thund’ring threatens solaced peace and emissaries of quietude finally release the embers of a drown-ed shore’s impasse the softest hush of tranquility’s certain dove-bled cry o’ershadows anvilled sounds that bleed our souls to dry |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good... original diction. Enjoyed much! Grover. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
steaven, I love your writing. the rhyme and rhythm are superb!!!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
grover & ethyl, gotta run...but thank you very much for the kind comments |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Steavenr -- this was brilliant -- I especially liked the line, "as Thor-like thund’ring threatens solaced peace" -- most effective!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I love your style, makes me think |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wow, reminded me of the heartbeat of a sad heart Just clammoring away, waiting for a lost love... Terrific Steaven!  |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
I just pottering around, at work..browsing and then...BLAM! This blew me away. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece it was excellent. You completely mangled up my thought track, but hey it was well worth it.  WONDERFUL ^*Kim*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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