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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Are my eye's out of focus? Have I been denied, my ocular senses? I swear that something just flew by! A hummingbird perhaps...or sprite? ************************************ Sun-rays on green potters glaze Reflect on thee this summer day; Speeds atomic, whirling wings, Match dervish deeds of heat-beats... * Thrust, Black arrow Deep in Mandeville; Drink sprite Glare, click, Display A moment bright; Ruby jewels, Then dart away... Diamond dot Of nectar on Your beak. * end |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sounds like a hummingbird to me, and I love watching them dart around. Very enjoyable write. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Almost melodic to read! Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice I've had those spots before my eyes. Enjoyed |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the cadence of your write was like watching the hummingbird for myself, the reader...you taught the ears to see...well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (does happy hummingbird waltz) Awwwwwwww, I love hummingbirds and faeries soooooo much, sweet friend, I still believe faeries exist but until I see one hummingbirds are just as magical to me, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ford, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like how it poured down the page, very stylish |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
In a rush today...but need to reply, so I will with a group hug and a smile of appreciation for all of you who have replied to this poem.....send cosmopolitan thanks as well as individuals _______ice ><> |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love this one too. :-) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very much enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
jeweled dervishes... magic on wing... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Froggy........  LeeJ.......... Sunshine...... Thank you for reading, and your nice comments... _________ice ><> |
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