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Sometimes Across the Loss
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Sometimes Across the Loss |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Sometimes Sometimes in comes this feeling like touch like song it is from inside healing And it tells me true and it stays into the dark the place of waiting the part not as if I could sing but I do for this time it is my song all along Sometimes yes there is I hear and it speaks my mouth and it knows my ear And I can listen then I can sleep again with a voice soft across I can cross the loss |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A river, more deep than wide. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Martie, what a perfect poem to hold, deep within, as the night beckons, and dreams of what could be... keep us warm, and safe, until the unknown promises, of tomorrow... Pleasant Dreams  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...this aches, to my bones.  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Martie A good poem to read at 3 a.m. when you can't sleep, I'll save it for those times when that happens to me... enjoyed________ice ><> |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Martie, this is a sweet wave of hope and love caressing you. And through you ... me too. Love and hugs.Margherita |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Sometimes in comes this feeling like touch like song it is from inside healing" Nicely done. "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSIS~ sometimes you touch me even more tenderly ... this is that time~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but I do for this time it is my song all along ~*~ The chasm is wide, the fall, so dark but the song will lift and carry.... Well done, my friend. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes yes there is I hear and it speaks my mouth and it knows my ear And I can listen then I can sleep again with a voice soft across I can cross the loss How very beautiful... may those sometimes be whenever you need them. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you reveal the depth and breadth of feelings and thoughts and knowing you have gathered over the years - this says so much about how one "handles" a loss - loved it Martie - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A beautiful write. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautiful write martie...healing ...sigh...what can I say, healing is a good thing... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, this really touched my heart. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Hugs Ethel |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi, Martie. A very touching write. The healing process is long and hard but when we know it's happening we can speed it along. My best to you. Helen |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Martie~ this just aches....but it is so beautiful with such emotion...heart hugssss ~~**~~ |
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