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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-02-17 11:48 PM



Walking along the shore,
looking for more,
there I see...

evidence of you,

Staring at a face in a crowd,
shouting your name out loud,
there I see...

evidence of you,

A flower in bloom,
the warm sun in June,
there I see...

evidence.of you,

The stars in the sky,
Sometimes we ask why?,
there I see...

evidence of you,

The gift of a lonely heart,
tears cleansing, new start,
there I see...

evidence of you,

A newborn babys smile,
friendship that goes the extra mile,
there I see...

evidence of you,

Blood stained tears,
naills on a cross,
death without fear,
saving the lost,

There I see....
JESUS
(evidence of you)
JESUS
(evidence of you)
JESUS

Clouds in a sky
people cry
and there I see....

Evidence of you,

Lonely man on a street,
wants soemthing to eat,
people in other countries cry,
for something missing inside,

There I see evidence of you Jesus....

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-18 03:08 AM


beautiful write...very spiritual
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-02-18 06:26 PM


Jesus, Jesus, Jesus, sweetest name I know...James
Rick
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3 posted 2004-02-19 07:26 AM


Dear ARH, a great vision you have shared, enjoyed the read, thank you my friend.

Sincerely
Rick

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4 posted 2004-02-19 10:29 AM


RomanticHeart~
This is spiritually moving ... oh, so lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Ericc
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5 posted 2004-02-19 02:10 PM


Excellent.

Reminds me or words Mother Thersa once shared when asked of her encounters is the slums of Calcutta..."I see the face of Jesus in all of His distressing guises."

Eric

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6 posted 2004-02-21 12:48 PM


sigh...Very beautiful...and very well done too, my thoughts before getting to the bottom was that it sounded like a poem about the lord and lo and behold it was! Very nicely done, very spiritual and moving.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

iliana
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7 posted 2004-02-21 01:00 AM


A Romantic Heart -- a beautiful write!  hugs, jo
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8 posted 2004-02-21 03:45 AM





A Romantic Heart

And a wonderful Heart


Very beautiful Princess!





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9 posted 2004-02-21 08:39 AM


Beautiful ARH, very descriptive and  compassionate that touches on despair and hope. Excellent work!!
MGROVES
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10 posted 2004-02-21 04:59 PM


beautiful


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