navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #31 » To Balladeer
Open Poetry #31
Post A Reply Post New Topic To Balladeer Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-02-17 05:23 PM


To Balladeer

It’s true Larry C and me
Did spend a day upon the sea
And there while drinking beer
Came up the name of Balladeer

And it did appear to Larry c
And it did appear to me
That Dear was quite myopic
When he is philosophic

For Dear was not to far from us
Writing up this bit of fuss
And a sea gull did dive a stream
Of yellow brine across his beam

That struck the poem a mess of dots
And added odor to the rot
What made us smile from ear to ear?
Was the piddle landed in dears bear?

And when he smiled a toast to we
We grabbed our sides and fell into the sea.

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2004-02-17 05:52 PM


Great comeback Sy, especially the piddle landing!  

gotta love the bantering~

muted
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
2 posted 2004-02-17 06:07 PM



LMAO

Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
3 posted 2004-02-17 06:16 PM


Oh, no! and all the time I thought I was drinking St. Pauli Gull!!

Good try, Sy, I say but see the lie there in your epopee....oh, no! More pee!

Youngatheart
Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333

4 posted 2004-02-17 06:36 PM


Thanks for making me smile awhile.
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
5 posted 2004-02-17 07:22 PM


I've got the picture...LOL - Watch out, Sy... He might start using placebo juice on your palmetto bugs...
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2004-02-17 07:45 PM




Sy, keep it up!
Now where's Larry???

Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
7 posted 2004-02-18 07:22 AM


Deer, you sure it wasn't "Papst Blue Robin?"



Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
8 posted 2004-02-18 01:29 PM


ROFLOLOL!!
Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
9 posted 2004-02-18 01:32 PM


You guys are a hoot! Grover.
Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
10 posted 2004-02-18 01:36 PM


You folks do give me a smile. You are all such a hoot.....
Love Bon-Bon

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
11 posted 2004-02-18 01:37 PM


Fantastic Sy!!

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
12 posted 2004-02-18 02:49 PM



What a comeback, Seymour!!
Ya'll are so cute!!  

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
13 posted 2004-02-18 02:59 PM


garysgirl
Thank you sweet.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #31 » To Balladeer

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary