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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2004-02-17 12:12 PM


When was it, I wonder,
the moment I first realized
you were not a thing to posses?
~
Today, an early mist captured
my imagination,
and now, it is gone.
~
If I stood at the edge of all memory,
would you be there to catch me,
or fall into nothingness,
evaporate?

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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-02-17 12:23 PM


If I stood at the edge of all memory,
would you be there to catch me,
or fall into nothingness,
evaporate


This verse on it's own says so much.
Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2004-02-17 01:39 PM


I ponder this too, what a lovely poem.

Enjoyed this thoroughly, Robert~

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3 posted 2004-02-20 11:30 AM



Those who remain possessions
are sometimes doomed to failure...

Very good, Robert.

Thank you.

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4 posted 2004-02-20 11:40 AM


Wonderful write here Robert.
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

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displaced
5 posted 2004-02-20 12:38 PM


reminds me of something I would write

beautifully sad

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6 posted 2004-02-20 01:00 PM


Robert~
This is softly meaningful ... a pleasured read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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