tell me..! about the fading,

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Open Poetry #31

tell me..! about the fading,

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2004-02-17 02:48 AM

what of your fading
believing and to think about your
tender hindered feelings such insolence
of life has turned so tasteless your sheets
pirouette through digital pages locutions
slip in so easily side by side even in

the night they’re unable to
hide you pray for

mornings
light but
slumber
has hung
your eyes tears
in useless spent like frayed

curtains torn in bleak city’s dark laments hang
there alone they quietly weep & mollify you scribble
it down Monday hoping to keep to find Friday comes
stealing but again you’ve lost the time and behind
your failing mind you cry for the crimes of
the week which have caught
you

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-02-17 03:02 AM

I could hear acoustic guitar music with this one...nice format

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-02-17 09:14 AM

Lucky~
Oh my ... what a treasured find for my morning reads~

More ! More ! More !
(oh ... there are MORE ... off to read them ALL)
Love n' *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-17 01:56 PM

Lucky, I love your format on this one, and
the words, of course. Very good writing.

Hugs
Ethel

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