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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-02-17 02:41 AM



My heart is free to breathe,
ready to filter love,
it does not linger on my sleeve,

Time to let you go away,
fly towards the sun,
it was never meant to stay,

So many good things and bad,
ones I will teasure,
some happy and some sad,

I am ready now, I am strong,
to be free to love again,
no chains, no right or wrong,

Just life moving on,
hearts letting go
you were not the one,

Always will you be a part,
of my life, my love,
time helps to heal a heart,

It is now the end, i perceive,
hands touch for one more goodbye,
I take a long deep breath,

For now I am free to breathe....

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-17 02:48 AM


oh wow...so Many feelings expressed right here that I know all to well...When you are finally at that letting go point it is kind of like being able to breathe again, I never thought of it that way, thanks for the different view point. I loved the poem, I could go on and on about it but I'll just end by saying that it says what I've been trying to say(and failing to say) about an old love for quite some time. Beautiful...
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-02-17 02:50 AM


you go lady! I'm proud of you!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2004-02-17 03:10 AM


Thnaks bebe...I have two that i am letting go of...Thanks for your wonderful comments...I appreciate them! So glad we could relate heart to heart!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-02-17 03:13 AM


Dixie you know how I feel , we have so much in common...we can relate to eachother so well, yes I am letting go of both...time to move on....time to be happy and free..life is too short!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Richy
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5 posted 2004-02-17 05:18 AM





It sounds like you came to a crossroads
in life Romantic Heart, and that you decided
to to take a different path...

Well, just take a few steps at a time...
smell some roses... Take that nice
deep breath... and enjoy the view

Oh... and watch out for any hungry
wolves, in little red hoods  

I bid you Godspeed Romantic Heart
And I wish you all the best!


Richy

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6 posted 2004-02-17 05:51 AM


God bless you, ARH. I wish you
all the best in what life has to offer.
You are such a sweet, loving person, and
I just know you will meet the right one
one day.
Hugs  
Ethel

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