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Sadelite
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0 posted 2004-02-16 11:36 AM


            


Pushing fingers down piano keys
Faster than they wish to go,
Maintaining the parallel
To the 4/4 time we know.

It seems all
an alla breve race
Between love and life
Death and space…

Plucked at eleven,
Gone to heaven;
A love at fifty
Eyes still misty.

Still, it’s been no difference
In life’s plight
Equal, just faster, but
Still, much to ears delight.  

Alla breve  


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iliana
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1 posted 2004-02-16 11:45 AM


Beautiful, Sadie!
Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-02-16 12:16 PM


iliana,
   Glad you think so.  Did I tell you that L. decided to quit piano lessons?  Her teacher is too good to let go so now, I'm going to take lessons instead--she's going to teach me theory so that someday I might compose.  (I saw the word alla breve and it struck a poetic chord with me--just had to find a way to use it!)   Glad you liked the poem.  I'm sure you understood the depths...
               ~sadie~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-16 01:09 PM


that's wonderful!

I used to play myself, long long ago

Sadelite
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4 posted 2004-02-16 01:19 PM


passing,
   Is there a chance you can take it up again?  It is very refreshing and therapeutical for me--it lets me pour out feelings I never knew I had until I hear them.  If a piano isn't possible, perhaps an wooden Indian flute?
           Sadie

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