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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-02-16 11:29 AM


I am held here
      in the hues of yesterday,
where the heart
is still tugged on
by the string of memories
        of you,
and I can't seem to get past
these Shadows Of Blue....


(thanks Kari for the inspire)

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-16 11:31 AM






iliana
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2 posted 2004-02-16 11:55 AM


Beautiful, Gentle Spirit!
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3 posted 2004-02-16 12:57 PM


I understand completely!
Grover
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4 posted 2004-02-16 01:10 PM


Very good! Grover.
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5 posted 2004-02-16 01:11 PM


Beautiful pretty lady!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2004-02-16 11:01 PM


As long as the inspiration finds a home then the blue will hold some quality of sapphire exchange.  Sort of reminds me of a saying I have.  " If time were taken from the heart of man then we would have no way to measure the pain of love. "
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7 posted 2004-02-16 11:24 PM


nice
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8 posted 2004-02-17 05:49 AM


Beautiful writing, Donna.
I'm glad that Karilea inspired you.
Hugs  
Ethel

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-02-17 08:51 AM


I will be back to address each of you when more time allows, but wow...thanks for the replies!

Mark..." If time were taken from the heart of man then we would have no way to measure the pain of love. " I'm gonna quote you on that ok. When you share your wisdom and friendship it is a blessing.

Kari's simple words inspired this simple little verse and I am grateful as it has been awhile since I have been able to enjoy writing....so thanks Kari, and thanks to everyone for reading.  HUGS

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-17-2004 10:21 AM).]

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2004-02-17 01:11 PM


Those strings of memeories will do that every time...
So pretty in the shadows painted blue.

Hugs Donna~

Robert Frazier
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11 posted 2004-02-17 03:09 PM


"I am held here
      in the hues of yesterday"

this is simply perfect!
i am held in the hues of your poetry...

R

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12 posted 2004-02-17 04:12 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Donna, I'm sorry that you're feeling sad right now, sweet friend, I hope you feel better and whatever it is will calm and out of the tears you will find new clarity soon, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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13 posted 2004-02-17 04:25 PM


enjoyed
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