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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-02-13 08:08 AM



In A Box

I present to you
my valentine
in a box,
collected for years,
the sheer of me
waiting...

No rhyme or reason
perfume growing stale,
a treasure
of pleasures
unused...

Invisible inked
love letter,
named unknown
sealed
with a kiss
and a touch
of each dawn.

Somewhere...
Pandora smiles

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
1 posted 2004-02-13 08:17 AM


somewhere maybe she does
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-02-13 08:44 AM


Maureen,
A mature write, enjoyed.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-02-13 10:03 AM


Somewhere...
Pandora smiles

Maureen, I could sit and read your writings all day long. Awesome. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-02-13 12:31 PM


*big smile* yes
vandana
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5 posted 2004-02-13 12:34 PM


enjoyed
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2004-02-15 06:58 PM


This is so cool and bitter sweet.
Loved how you ended it with a smile.

Maureen~  

Martie
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7 posted 2004-02-15 07:35 PM


Maureen

So many treasures are part of you...they are beautiful.

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