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Open Poetry #31

The Labyrinth of the Lost

chinadude89
Junior Member

since 2004-02-03

Posts 31
Texas

0 posted 2004-02-12 06:41 PM

Lost inside a room of mirrors.
Lost inside this desecration.
Searching through a room of spears,
For a sign of bright revelation,
That's far away from the Spirit of Decapitation.
Lost in a giant maze,
Of cryptic writings,
A devilish sage,
And monsters that love biting.
Created by the master of illusions.
Surrounded by dark incantations,
Causing nothing but unexplainable confusion.
I don't know where to go,
So many choices to make.
So much to do and so little time in this flow.
This is something we all must have.
Trapped in this chaos.
The Labyrinth of the Lost.

Phil
"We may all speak a different language, but we all live under the same moon and stars," anonymous.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-12 06:48 PM

Good poem... vivid images, metaphors! Grover.

j0n4th4n
Member

since 2003-03-11

Posts 94

2 posted 2004-02-12 07:28 PM

very vivid.. i see pictures through your poem..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-02-13 04:41 AM

perfectly describes ME

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