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XxnoraxX
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0 posted 2006-02-06 04:53 PM



She goes through her day laughing and smiling
She gets good grades- she has many friends
But no one could ever guess that she was dying

She wanted her parents to be proud
They didnt care about her- abusing her whenever they can
She ignored them- not even making a sound

Her shelter wasn't her room;
no it was school
that was the one place where they couldnt hurt her

On weekends, she spent her time at friend's houses
She was usually loud and funny
But when her parents were around, she was nothing but a mouse

She wanted more than drunk parents
who didnt even care
She wanted true ones who would love her forever

Her smiles were fake
Her tears at night were real
Every birthday, she only wished for real parents for heavens sake!

So, next time you see a "perfect" person
Just stop a minute and tell yourself-
No one is perfect- theres a good chance its all F.A.K.E

XxnoraxX

ps.) nope this isnt about me I just felt like writing it- i would love it if you commented on this

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Jezzika
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1 posted 2006-02-07 01:52 PM


"So, next time you see a "perfect" person
Just stop a minute and tell yourself-
No one is perfect- theres a good chance its all F.A.K.E"

I loved this poem but that part was really good. I liked it alot because i have looked at someone and wished that i was like them because they seem to have a "perfect" life. This was a great poem!!
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2 posted 2006-02-08 12:52 PM


I know that girl.

She's fifty now, and there is a kind of peace she has found, mainly within herself, for herself.

But so has Pearl Harbor.

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XxnoraxX
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3 posted 2006-02-08 03:25 PM


Thanks for replying guys!


XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

EagletonDiva
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4 posted 2006-02-15 12:08 PM


A lessoned learned myself through my life.  I grew thinking the popular girls were all that and I was nothing, when in reality we were all the same.  Children of drunks.  Praying for the pain to go away.
Sad

Belinda
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5 posted 2006-02-16 04:39 PM


I really liked this I thought it was very interesting, especially the last verse. All though it isn't about you(it isn't is it?), I can some what relate to it. Very good write xD

Belinda x x

XxnoraxX
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6 posted 2006-02-16 08:01 PM


Thanks so much for replying guys- i rly appriciate it



XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

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7 posted 2006-02-19 04:07 PM


yeah one of my friends are like that perfect in school but her home life is hell

Where your heart lays is where you belong.

[This message has been edited by latteaddict213 (02-20-2006 05:56 PM).]

XxnoraxX
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8 posted 2006-02-19 05:29 PM


thanks for replying-luv hearing from you

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

intention
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9 posted 2006-05-04 03:17 PM


m rely sorry i got it late ... i was going through ur old posts n found this one as the best.. its rely amazing... rely wonderful... keep posting

Love me for who i m

pullingxthextrigger
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10 posted 2006-05-04 08:09 PM


my old name :]  
lol thx 4 replying

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3  llx - P!ATD!

Junebug
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11 posted 2006-05-07 05:23 AM


wow i like totally love this one cause i kinda get how it feels....only not.....things are like a mess for me right now....but when i'm around people n stuff i act like nothings wrong...but at night i like cry myself to sleep....this totally rocks, I love it!!!!!!! the only part i dont connect with is the parents thing...my parents arent fake....
pullingxthextrigger
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12 posted 2006-05-11 10:20 PM


lol thx for replying junebug
glad u liked it :]

~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

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13 posted 2006-05-26 10:03 AM


wow, that was good keep on writing

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nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2006-05-27 06:56 AM


loved the title...

and it is sad that so many young people feel this way and have to deal with parents who can't see what they are/ or are not doing for their children.

M

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