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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-03-22 03:37 PM



Break me...
Free from this struggle….
Walk with me...
Let the journey begin…
Take me….
Away from the shadows of the past…
Talk with me…
Ease the pain away…

Each day it gets harder,
To deal with this
Never-
Ending-
Torture.

Heal me…
Make the wounds fade…
Face with me…
The terror in my mind…
Feel me…
When the fear takes control…
Race with me…
Away from these memories…

Each day it gets harder,
To deal with this
Never-
Ending-
Torture.

Miss me…
More than anything else…
Cry with me…
When the sadness becomes too much…
Kiss me…
When my tears won’t seem to stop…
Fly with me…
Away from this hurtful place…

Each day…
It grows harder…
To deal with this –
NEVER!
ENDING!
TORTURE!

There is no hope…There is…
Only you.

"I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne

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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-03-22 04:17 PM


Amazing poem.
I love it.
Awesome ending.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

loner187
Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 106
Upstate New York
2 posted 2004-03-25 10:41 PM


Really awesome poem. Deep. Just, awesome.

-A

"Love doesn't make the world go 'round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile."
   -Franklin P. Jones

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