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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-10-14 06:36 AM



Wanting so badly –
For these memories –
To fade away,
But still they linger.
Like a bad habit,
I still think of them,
Wishing I wouldn’t.
And that unanswered question –
Ends each thought –
Why?
Why did all this happen?
Why me?
Why you?
Why now?
Why ever?...

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

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dertah
Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-14 10:42 AM


im there with you, only wanting to create more memories.  good write.
Silent Evincar
Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179
Here There and Places Between
2 posted 2003-10-14 07:21 PM


.... and then out of nowhere it feels like the twilight zone. Everything stops and you don't even know what you're questioning anymore. The sun doesn't set right all of a sudden and the stars scream betrayel. That is when you turn around and start a whole new path. Very nice, I enjoyed the idea of unanswered question.

      NJS

peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
3 posted 2003-10-14 08:56 PM


This was a good one, I can DEF. relate to this one... ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
4 posted 2003-10-15 10:32 AM


I love this one. I'm speechless. I just love it. Loves.

*I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...*

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