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Teen Poetry #7

A Fine Restaurant.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2004-02-12 04:40 PM

He know's what he likes.
You're such a dish
Consumed and devoured
with insult and injury
by his monstrous ego.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2004-02-12 06:02 PM

Clever....it wasn't what I expected.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2004-02-12 06:41 PM

Kittens yawning are one of the cutest things you can witness.

This poem was very good. I think there is room for more. But I enjoyed what I read, and that is a great analogy.
~Lex

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2004-02-12 07:27 PM

I like your work particularly because it always keeps me guessing.

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