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..One Last Time..
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..One Last Time.. |
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AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
I should of never put it off told you maybe tomorrow Now i'm left with nothing but deep sorrow Maybe i should leave my self to blame I take life for granted like its some type of game it feels like a dream Im running running to find im getting no where Im yelling louder and louder and you still aren't there I never understood why you grabbed the rope, to me nothing was wrong you had no signs of hurt Never thought i'd have to take this ride alone You were my sister, my bestfriend, my back bone Together we did everything All that teenagers do Now i'm all alone doing everything with out you You can't imagine the pain I would do anything to have you back here with me I keep in my mind that some day soon it'll be us again ..just you and me.. Every morning when i awake i feel so completely empty i say to my self this is a dream Oh yes, it can't be true because when you left you took me with you Rip |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
loved the ending, good write. |
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sixington Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 53Utah |
beautiful. there is so much emotion in this, keep it up. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
I loved this, very emotional. Great job |
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saddest girl New Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 4living in your letters |
wow. i loved it. i could almost feel your pain. keep writing. <3 jordan |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Omg! I loved this, I share your pain....I feel my sister's dead...she moved away.....n Its difficult..But im sorry you had to go through this..*hugs*. keep strong! * A wise monkey never monkies with another monkey's monkey * |
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