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SweetStephanie
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 18
Alabama,

0 posted 2004-01-31 05:54 AM



I thought we were friends.
I thought you cared.
I guess I thought wrong.
I gave you so much and you took it all for granted.
I gave you the man I loved and
You acused me of tring to break ya'll up.
Now look at us all we're doing is fighting
and you blame it all on me.
But you need to sit down and think.
Who has always been there for you.
Who has showed you the way.
And who will do it for you now that I'm
gone!


© Copyright 2004 STEPHANIE PIERCE - All Rights Reserved
SweetStephanie
Junior Member
since 2003-12-29
Posts 18
Alabama,
1 posted 2004-01-31 05:56 AM


i wote this years ago when I was Losing my best friend we were like sisters and to this day we are nolonger friends and i still miss her with all my heart

Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 94
United States-Iowa
2 posted 2004-07-27 03:23 PM


Hey, I could see the feeling behind it, it was pretty short but not bad.

~*.:Leah:.*~

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2004-07-27 08:53 PM


Looks like that person really screwed up.
You seem like a good friend, so just lay back and chill out. Don't even worry about that person because if she can't see that you were actually a good person to her, then she shouldn't be your friend in the first place

keep posting/replying

I left my wallet in El Segundo...
And I gotta get it
I got got to get it!

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
4 posted 2004-07-28 11:31 AM


hey, yeah, i loved this. Totally can relate to it right now. I also gave up the guy that i really really loved, or well, i am not sure that i "loved" him, but you get the pic. Anyways, they went out, and now he broke up with her, and his best freind, told me that he has been cheating on her for like the past month or two.... and now he wants me back (not gonna happen) , and me and Lynsay are no longer freinds as far as i am concerned, because of all the things she has done latley, and the things that she has said..... And we will sjust save that story for another day. ~lol~

The point.... well is basically that i get ya. I know how ya feel to a certain extent. If ya wanna write, feel free, i know i wouldnt mind it...


The poem itself was amazing though. I really enjoyed it... I dont think that i coulld've dont better myself...
I hope everything works out, and one day she is gonna realize what she lost...

Kissa


I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2004-08-02 06:51 PM


How could someone do this? Believe me, if someone did this to you, especially your best friend, you are wwaayy to good for her.

~Alli~


I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry.

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