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Get Away |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I was never happy, For as long as I’ve lived here, Considering what you put me through. So many years, Of my young life WASTED. ON YOU! Get away from ME! Just leave me alone! That’s all I ask, I don’t want to be another drone... Like you. Wasted…on you… So many times… You broke my trust… After I learned, This horrible news… I’ve been nothing but… CRUSHED! Get away from ME! Just leave me alone! That’s all I ask, I don’t want to be another drone... Like you. Crushed…by you… I’m tired of being a depression magnet, Just stay away from me! I’m tired of being your slave, And doing every little thing, I’m asked to do. I can’t wait until I’m finally... FREE! Get away from ME! Just leave me alone! That’s all I ask, I don’t want to be another drone... Like you. Free…from all your lies, And the broken promises. Free from everything you are. I’ll finally get away, From you and all your drama, Same goes for everyone else, I’ll finally get away, Before you can leave yet another… SCAR! Get away from ME! Just leave me alone! That’s all I ask, I don’t want to be another drone... Like you. Look at what you have become... Why would I EVER want to be like that?... Stop trying to change me... This is me. Deal with it. "Pain is just weakness escaping the body." |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey very nice well it isnt nice but yaknow wat i mean i liked it... very raw and relentless hardcore darkness Please answer, I'm calling just to find out if you could be there for me when I crack - finger 11 |
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Jelfling Junior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 21Indiana |
you remind me of someone I used to know once, in another site. Called themselves Soul Grinder. He was a good writer too. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Ahh... yes. I love it. It says a lot, and i can definately relate to it! I have a friend who has hurt me or "crushed" me so many times. We try to still be friends, but sometimes it is just so weird, for me anyways. I used to just want him to go away, and i think that it would have been so much better if i had just never met him, ya know?!?! I dont know, i guess things happen for a reason! You live, ya cry, ya laugh then ya die. Wow, that sounds really ddepressing. Its not meant to though. I dont know, i hope everything gets better! ~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I really love this piece. Very strong emotions in it. I especially loved the last stanza. Thanks for sharing. W.W. |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Man, I'm diggin' this piece....lots of stuff I can relate to. But who can't, huh? Guess that's what makes it so good... -Adam Your life was lost; sweetheart I grieve for you |
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