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sweet_lost_palestinian1
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0 posted 2004-01-25 12:19 PM



….
Are we meant to be hurt?
Are we meant to have depression all our lives?

You leave without a sign?
U leave me worriedyears and YEARS AND THAN u just disappear?

Am I not good enough?
Or am I lame girl?

After you showed me the beauty of life.
After youmade me smell taste of heaven?

After all the trouble I went through with all my lovers .just to
Fight for u..


What?...im not good enough?
Or im just a lame girl?

U showedhow life really ment and how people really are u even showed me the smile
A smile that will never end..

Even though you left me ,I got nothing to say but I wont ever hate you..
Even though you leftI wont forget the promises to u..because im going to keep wAITING
For you sign,,the beauty of life…REMEMBER LIFE WITHOUT YOU ,DON’T COSTBUT PAIN ANDDEATH…

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1 posted 2004-01-26 09:28 PM


Life does leave us with millions of questions that hopefully we'll learn over time.
One hopefully constructive criticism...try and make your thoughts flow more freely

Keep the poems coming!

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

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