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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-01-21 06:49 AM

Imagine that everything,
You’ve come to know,
Love,
Trust,
Need,
Is ripped away from you,
Torn clean from your heart,
With no stitching.

Oh there’s no way,
To stitch me back together,
There’s no chance to heal me,
I’ll just stay un-mended forever.

Imagine that everything,
You do,
Every decision you make,
Every turn you take,
Everything you say,
Is always wrong,
With nothing to fix it.

Oh there’s no way,
To stitch me back together,
There’s no chance to heal me,
I’ll just stay un-mended forever.

No! No way!
Oh there isn’t any way…
To fix this broken –
Mind,
Heart,
Body,
There is no way to fix it,
It’ll stay this way forever,
Because maybe….just maybe,
It likes it this way.

"Pain is just weakness escaping the body."

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2004-01-21 08:45 AM

This was a great poem! Good work!

~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2004-01-21 11:32 AM

Thanks Jess....

"Pain is just weakness escaping the body."

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-01-21 07:49 PM

Wow, this poem is... wow. It is beautifull! This is definitley going into my library thingymabopper! I love this, you are good! (I am jealous!!) lol Hope to hear more!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

4 posted 2004-01-21 09:12 PM

Yeah i thought that was pretty good, well done. Keep writing, I'd like to see more.

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

5 posted 2004-01-22 12:14 PM

wow.omg...reall nice poems ..thank u for giving me an idea to draw im an young artist i love drawing and writting poem so my next pic will be taking place in this..thank u soo much keep it upp.

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