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sweet_lost_palestinian1
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since 2004-01-08
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0 posted 2004-01-16 07:19 PM



i put my face down on the pillow and cry soo hard .
just not to feel the pain.

i go outside and scream s00 hard to take away the blame.

i run soo fast to try and get out my name.

i facedeath andtears with my happiness.
and ask why?who?when

i go in my room lay on the floor and scream soo hard until all the birds fly away.

i go in the kitchen i would wish to break the glasses on my heart so it would atleast make me feel better.

i go call for help..but does anybody care?

.........................................

NOBODY CARES.nobody asks why..??...all they askdont u desreve it?....ur no good but in crying ...and when i ask but how?...they say u will never learn....

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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-01-18 02:39 PM


This...was different, but not in a bad way. The ending though was hard to understand for me, but other than that i really enjoyed it. I hope to hear more!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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