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Naked Truth
Junior Member
since 2003-12-28
Posts 11
Det, Mi.

0 posted 2004-01-13 05:57 PM



Stop ..
please wait..
its not time to go..
dont leave
take a load off
in my house
in my home
on my couch
where my loads have been laid.
and my secrets are kept
and problems
have been smelborp
where i put all of mine on my house's shoulders

wait
hold up..
as a matter of fact
you can leave i dont think my home can hold
anybody else's setbacks
it already screeches of back pains

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Xonicx
Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 20
Vancouver, WA
1 posted 2004-01-14 04:36 PM


whats the exactly about?

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