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kissa~rachelle
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0 posted 2004-01-12 11:06 PM


Your like a drug i'm addicted to,
when i'm with you it's great,
but when i'm not, i want you!
I hate the feeling of helplessness
I get when your around.
I hate the craving i get for your touch.
I need and love you so much!
The way i cant live without you scares me.
I hope someday you'll see,
You're my day, my night,
you're my everything!
But like a drug,
theres a downside.
At first with you,
its like a high,
I feel so loved
and everything seems right.
but then everything goes to hell,
I just want to leave, to bail.
I start to feel like
unwanted and unloved,
and i think to myself,
you're realy not worth it.

This isnt my best work, and it is far from great, but overall i thing i did ok. Tell me what you think, but dont be too hard on me!~lol~


**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
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1 posted 2004-01-12 11:31 PM


yeah, I like it.
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