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the_fortress
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since 2003-12-31
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0 posted 2004-01-11 11:05 PM



Laying alone
lights are dim
looked at the clock
only three minutes gone by
What a long night ahead
Earlier when the news was told
my stomach felt as if sinking
i didn't know what to think
All I knew
Was you were in tears
And for that I almost was
Worrying, thinking, awake
All throughout the night
I was alone
Staring at that clock
It's red glow driving me insane

I remember driving by your house
At midnight only hours before
Hoping you would come outside
And we could drive to freedom
My dreams are hopes and hope is faith
Why do I act so silly?

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lilibeelee
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since 2001-07-12
Posts 143

1 posted 2004-01-12 09:14 PM


I like this. keep up the good work
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