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sweet_lost_palestinian1
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0 posted 2004-01-10 01:40 PM



IF ONE DAY I THINK I WANNA DIE
I WANT YOU TO KNOW I WILL DIE FOR U
...IF ONE DAY U THINK IM GOING TO GET HURT .
.I PROMISE YOU I WILLL GET KILLED JUST FOR U.
.IF ONE DAY I WILL HATE I WILL HATE EVERYONE BUT YOU..IF ONE DAY I WILLL BE ALONE KNOW UR THE ONE THE ONE THAT WILL MAKE ME SMILE.
.YOUR MY LOVE,MY HAPPINESS,MY SOUL,MY BLOOD ...

YOUR LIKE MY ANGELLLLLLL..WITHOUT U
,IM A HEART WITHOUT BLOOOD /.
..IM AN ANGEL WITHOUT A WING ..IM A OCEAN WITHOUT WATER.IM A NAME WITHOUT A MEANING ,IM FOOD WITHOUT TASTE..
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLZZ

JUST STAY WITH ME BECAUSE IM JUST -NOTHING-NOTHING-NOTHING WITH-OUT....

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1 posted 2004-01-10 04:22 PM


You put forth your emotions very well and you clearly show through your words what strong feelings you have for this person. Very well said

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

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