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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-01-09 09:36 PM

I hate fighting with you,
It hurts me so bad,
It cuts me so deep,
When you are mad.

I tried saying sorry,
but you ignored me,
so i cried my eyes out,
like the never ending story.

I love being with you
but not when your mad.
You hurt me so bad,
and make me so sad.

I have so many scars,
outside and in,
from all the stuff you pull,
from all the stuff thats been.

I hope you all like this. Its short, but sweet...I think.

[This message has been edited by kissa~rachelle (01-11-2004 06:29 PM).]

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

1 posted 2004-01-10 12:10 PM

omg reallly really nice poem keep up the great workkk.....

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-10 12:13 PM

good write,,,but, just a clue,,,,,,they frown even on the astericks,,,,maybe you can find away to say the same thing,,,w/o the stars,,,,,,,,,take care
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-01-10 09:04 PM

it's not that we actually frown upon them, ....it's too that it was something everyone agreed to when signing up.....Carissa, hon I remember asking you last week or maybe at the first of this week, please go in and edit that out using astericks is the same as using the actual word....thank you!

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-10-2004 09:47 PM).]

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

4 posted 2004-01-11 11:35 AM

Great write hun!! You hit the emotion right on the head that no girl ever wants to feel when they are with a guy. As a guy myself i think its horrible that other males thinks it perfectly all right to cause pain and sorrow to a girl especially when the same as wonderful as you. Keep up the good work.

Hugs,
Chris (sweetpoet)

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

5 posted 2004-01-11 12:46 PM

great write

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