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Born Again
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
Reborn again into a life's fresh beauty Looking at everything with new light I have seen all of this before But now I have opened up my eyes Everything is clearer and I can finally make sense of it all I like this life im headed towards Long halls of grace and purity A sweet scent of love and beauty I've found my purpose, I've found my love I love this life im headed towards I've regained the strength I once held deep down And showered away the fear and pain I've got it all behind me now This picture is so clear. My mind is focussed on what I want And not of that which others behold I live my life for me now And my importance is so great I can be selfish, and I can be naive Because this life is mine, and no one else's I shot the thought of death turned glory And looked upon a lighter path I have the thoughts of a stronger girl I have the thoughts of me. I am here now, the person once hiding I am reborn again ~~ I know this doesnt rhyme, and the flow may not be great, but i had to many new emotions tonight, and i just wanted to express them with you all at pip, i hope you enjoyed |
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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
wow, im very impressed. i guess maybe i liked this poem so much because it put into words exactly what i was feeling--i came online to find some poetry to make sense of whats going on in my life right now, and this poem did it. thank you so much. (you said you knew it didnt rhyme and all-- i don't think that matters! it's great all the same). thanks for posting. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
good message. didnt care much for the style, but it was still alright |
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ascending_ecstasy Member
since 2004-01-21
Posts 102 |
yeah.... didnt flow or.... whatever but i like the... i dunno, the way you chose to express yourself. |
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