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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Short, but sweet. This i think even though it is short, its one of my favorites, because it came straight from my heart. So i hope ya'll like it! The game you play, is so screwed* up, screw* everything you say. I'm tired of all, the edit you pull, "whats up, I love you" I hear it every edit day. Is all the edit you say to me, even a little bit true? No, i didn't think it was, but whatever i dont edit need you! Okay, thats a load of edit, but saying it helps a little. The truth is i'm not sure if i could live without you! My hearts in your hands, so becareful, it's brittle. Too late, its already broken! [This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (12-30-2003 02:58 AM).] |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
this one holds a lot of anger....i liked it...and i imagine the original was a little bit more fiesty. all in all...it gets the message across |
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